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Torman_Rasdeyn8 months agoWhat else to say about these first two pieces. The action sequences are smooth and efficient. The pacing is brisk. I find myself rooting for the heroine and for her antagonist. Also appreciating how you’ve built anticipation for the power-play to come. Will she begin to win over her captor? Will the dusk elf soften? Will she be able to earn it? Yeah, you’ve got my attention.
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karina_jayde@karina_jaydeMay 11 Update: 'Fires Upon the Desert,' the first entry to my sequel to 'Drowning at Dusk' is up. This features a new main character in a new part of the setting, and is thus an easy entry point for new readers. While reading the original installment will give you the most co...
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