All Comments on 'Drowning in the Sea of Love'

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stroudlestroudleover 5 years ago
One word to say

Beautiful

OK so I got a few more for you. The fantasy was top draw, so sexy.

The relationship between Sara and Meleny is so much the better for the build up you gave it, not rushing into bed.

Romantic, wonderful and sexy.

Oh and the poem is worth 5 stars on it own

I carnt believe this has no other comments. It's so good

Thank you Smokey

Jc

XNickyXXNickyXover 3 years ago

Thank you for not rushing in like almost EVERY other author does here. This story has the perfect amount of build up, character depth and realistic events happening to make it seem like a realistic fairy tale. Just how fairy tales are beautiful this story never disappointed. Gosh I need a Melleny in my life.

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