by NotReallySure
such a well done story! i really enjoyed reading the male's perspective - and i hope i am never used as he did his 5th grade teacher!
Well-done! I love the combination of perspectives, the imagery, the fact thatvtheyceavhbuse different words for the same thing, and the use of "slouch." Great story!
Warm & sensitively written. I can really relate to, & connect, with the two characters. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. 5 stars.
Nice! VERY nice. I like the point/counter point effect of his and her contributions. Nicely spicy, romantic and plausibly human. Thank you for sharing!