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Click hereDidn't one of them say something to do with consensual sex?
"Aaaaaaaaarghhhhh! Ooooooh!" ...
Why would they need to mention that? I'd signed it because I thought it must be something to do with the possible glimpse of my naked breasts that the director had mentioned, if there was a struggle. The other actresses must've signed it and we certainly had seen more than a glimpse of their naked breasts which had been displayed in full view... But the red-haired actress was completely naked and being forcibly fucked! Surely that didn't mean we had all consented to... to that! No! It couldn't be...
"Aaaaaaaaarghhhhh! Oh God... Oh God... Oh God!!!" ...
This is definitely a porno movie, and surely, they must all be porn stars: Except me...
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Anonymous4 months agoI agree, her monologing was too repetitive and took me out of the story. It doesn't need to say the same thing five times for something to be emphasized; even twice is enough if you feel it's more necessary. Hope that helps!
Justacting4 months agoAuthorThank you for your critisiism. I know what you mean, but I think the repetition is valid to emphasise aspects of the story. I would be very interested to know whether other readers agree with you. If it is ruining their enjoyment of the piece as well, I should do something about it!
