All Comments on 'Dungeon 101'

Mistress is always right, bitch!

I said during the beta read that reading the first part of this made me feel like I needed a shower.

Not because it's badly written. But because it's so well written

I absolutely loathed your male character. And that was the point. Because he's a loathsome person.

Dark but well written story.

Damn!!! That was a surprise

@djrip - glad you know your role in life 🤭. Em

@Djmac1031 - I didn’t acknowledge you and X’s roles as beta readers / mental health counsellors, but - as you mention it - thank you both 🙏 . Em

@Lc69hunter - so pleased it was 😊. Em

O Em G. You are so bad! I read this, but it's not my cup of tea, so I didn't rate it. I'll be more careful in looking at the tags next time. As to being well written, that's not how I think of it - from the language/grammatical aspects - it has a need for improvement IMHO. Maybe the commenters are referring to the sequencing and the abusive aspects being well put together?

@dmalloed - PM me if you have some suggestions - Em

I almost wish Jason and Robin were married, so you could've put this in the Loving Wives category. The commenters would have been in an uncontrollable frenzy.

@LordGeofrey - I’ve had enough of winding up LW, hun. Em

Fantastic writing.

@Purple_Fronds - thank you so much for saying. 😊 Em

I'm not into anal, well not allowed to, to be honest. I'm not gay, so I enjoy reading your writings that I went the hole way through, once again great story, yes silly but you seem to pull some good things out of your writer's bag with everyone I've read. Nicely done again.

@oldtwit - thank you 😊 Em

Outstanding story. Very well crafted. Even though not usually my cup of tea, it is definitely worth the read.

@Paul_Chance - thank you for reading 😊 Em

Really great read. Love how you created the characters, how they grew (and twisted) into their roles and appreciated that this was your version of non-con. Authenticity wins

@JJ82490 - thank you 😊 Emily

Well written. The typical 'he deserved what he got' scenario. The problem with this situation is how do two wrongs EVER make a right?

By what right does she have to kidnap, abuse, brainwash and ruin his life. Who knows what his personal situation was, who missed him, work contacts, etc. Nothing makes his actions acceptable, even if he lived the worst travesty of a childhood imaginable.

This doesn't mean the 'big sister' gets do deliver vigilante justice because she feels she can. Whats happens now? It appears she has two brainwashed little slaves, neither of whom have any say, any rights, any dignity. She even depersonalized her 'little sister' to nothing more than 'gimp'.

How does this make 'big sister' any better than Jason?

Like I said, well written, not my cup of tea.

V.

@Anon - it’s a satire of rape porn. I know many people didn’t get that. Bad writing on my part, I guess. Emily