All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 03 Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Again, really well written. Your fight scenes are improving. Just far too short.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I'm sorry, but I hate Garnet. She's almost completely useless in a fight. Even using items like nets doesn't make up for the fact she's making him look bad constantly calling him the evil dark lord. She's just a joke character, and it's not even a good joke

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Garnet is not really supposed to be a fighter though and I don't think she's being used effectively. She relies on charms and wiles, not brute strength. I suspect that she has area status effects, so potentially more like a bard.

I wonder if that's what the author has in mind.

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