by winterwhereof
Thank you for the chapters! I am really loving this story. The girls are great, interesting and self motivated. The sexy scenes are hot and sexy. The relationships between them all are fragile and growing beautifully. Love this story! Please continue to write at your pace!
Idk back to back sexual encounters like we've had has had Natalie feeling and bit too dominant and maybe a tad egotistical although having her clearly respect boundaries and even have the dynamic flipped by Sofia did help a lot
Thanks for sharing...
Fantastic storyline/plot & I am really enjoying the character development. However, the mix between erotica/sex contra storyline is so overwhelming the erotica becomes boring! (especially in this posting ). I find it difficult to believe that you're only intent with this story is to document Natalies sexual escapades?
I love the idea that her paladin aura is tied to arousal. I feel like she should be able to use "Enhance" to increase her team's overall arousal too. She's missing a classic paladin smite though. Perhaps something linked/tied to having an orgasm. Another classic RPG paladin ability is Lay on Hands, or being able to give a burst heal. Maybe tie something like that into her girl cum. Being able to grant bonuses or health for taking her load.