by winterwhereof
This tale just keeps getting better. I have incorporated some of it into my RP campaign. My best friend loves it, can't wait til she sees her character get some lewd armor. You are amazing, keep up the great work.
I am especially enjoying this story arc with Shara the smith. Oh no, what if I make something naughty and scandalous? Oh no!
I love the way you keep expanding the world. I'm really interested to see what happens when they finally go on a quest!
A really nice balance between plot & erotica, both done exceptionally well. I am enjoying the ever-expanding universe, and really appreciate the political intrigue, looking forward to seeing you pay off some of the intricate setup you have begun to build (and we’re not yet halfway through year one!)…this is the kind of storytelling that inspires people to write fan-fiction & stories set in the universe you’ve crafted.
I will say Natalie’s dance card is overflowing to the point that there’s no way for her to possibly keep up…I wonder if some of her dance partners will be dancing with each other when Natalie’s not available - so many intriguing combos, be it Liz & Camille, or one or more of the girls dimming Elida and her crew. Also love the idea of Instructor Robin (and maybe Natalie’s casting tutor for a double team) domming Natalie when she is next distracted in class?!?
Thanks for sharing, you are a wonderful author!
Absolutely loved everything from sharas PoV, especially the insight into how smithing works and the foloow on lore into other aspects of the world and culture
This whole story has been incredible! I especially love how distinct each of the characters are.