All Comments on 'Dungeons and Drunk Girls Ch. 01'

Seemed to be some confusion on age, at one point he was 25 and she was 21, but then somehow she was the older sister and he was the little brother....... liked the story but this was annoying.

There wasn't any confusion on age -- she was saying that he would end up being a 25 year old loser, not that he already was one. He's just out of high school, while she is in college.

To the author, 5 stars -- would smash again! Well, would read again. Seriously, this is amazing, and I hope your chapters come as often as the characters in the story do.

Great start to a long series if done correctly. Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter.

He’s 25, she’s 21…then she’s the big sister, then he’s 18…what?

Complete waste of time reading this kind of crap

Was ok, not fantastic not crap but closer to 2* than 3*

These anonymous people just do /not/ get it. He's the little brother by age, and she's the big sister. When cuddling, she felt like the smaller person being hugged and held by the bigger stronger person, thus "big brother", "little sister". It's not like it's rocket surgery or something lol

And so well done throwing in the DnD! I lolled at the caricatures, especially Stabella! Fun :)

Whole thing is worth Five Stars.

Promising start, and they seem to have emotions for each other, but this seed of a plan, it seems less than optimal, in at least one important way.