All Comments on 'During the Storm'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot read, Red

Very well done (but with you, could we expect less?)

FtF

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Off Line Antics!

Loved this story. Storm drives lady off line. She immediately launches her sexual fantasy. So well described - so of the immediate nature. Very 'you are there-ish!' Wonderful story. Hot Read! Early Red - but up to her excellent current day standards.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Let Me Count the Ways

DC"

To heck with it. In all ways you've done your usual great job.

Thanks. Ronnie W.

babydoll2ubabydoll2ualmost 19 years ago
wow....

OH... MY... GOD... this was so beautifully and poignantly written. As the reader, I could feel the need, the longing, for her lover, her soulmate. I was taken through the buildup, to the climax, and back again...

this story flowed so smoothly... Excellent!

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