All Comments on 'Durmantravada Ch. 01'

Kept the pace and description amazing.... Eagerly waiting for next chapter.... I could really feel the rush everywhere while reading it.

Good one. Do continue it

After a long time have I found a good story set in India which is not a just a fuck and finish story but something which has substance. Please publish the remaining parts and finish the story.

Eagerly waiting.

A very good entry for the first story, try involving the mom and the siblings in some emotional romance here and also some heroic acts . Good read , and awaiting more of it.

Looking forward to see where it goes

Very nice start.

Please continue.

Firstly, I would like to congratulate you that you have put pen to paper and successfully captured the traditional Indian home setting, atleast from the perspective of one South Indian state.

Secondly, it also requires courage and fine attention to detail to imagine, observe and capture the sexual innuendos between brother and sister, especially in an Indian household. You seen to have achieved this flawlessly.

Keep up the good work and looking forward to your succeeding chapters ..👍👍

A very nice starting of a story in romantic Indian settings, mostly I read the stories in Indian settings are very flimsy and immature, looking absolutely false and unreal.Left apart very few,

One thing, the pure Tamil dialect / words in the story are not familiar even to me ( Being an North Indian), it is advisable to just an elaboration will be much in place, such the name of tree, other traditional structures etc, Keep up good work.

Liked the story so far. Good effort.

Fuck man it is scary. My boner deflated.

I came back here just hoping you'd posted the 5th part, been waiting for 2+ years now. Where'd u go?