All Comments on 'Durmantravada Ch. 02'

This is one of the best stories ever!! Please continue to write them fast! Cant wait to read em. If you need any editing or such ill do that free for ya. galaxys52389@gmail.com thats my email.

Awesome story keep it up

This story line, the narration and the amount of detail has been fantastic. Please continue to write more!!

Nice story, don't keep on waiting, add next parts at the earliest.

The story is one of the best I had read in the past decades. Love the way you are unravelling the plot.

You had a very good future in literature

When will the next part be coming?

As an Indian , I am very proud of your authentic storyline. But some feedback, you need to describe emotions and situations in detail. How is everything coming so easy to this guy? There needs to be seduction , reluctance and finally submission and pleasure. Also the exact positions while having sex and how they get into those positions are important to describe. But overall a good job. Keep it up.