All Comments on 'Dust to Dust Ch. 02'

Solid three dimensional characters, hot sex, an intriguing storyline... all the hallmarks of another Alpaca masterpiece in the making. The [[ threw me off at first, until I got to a point mentioning the switch from English to Terran. Might want to add something about that to the author's notes. This will be mentioned in the AH review thread shortly in a guest review =)

wow, u might have upped yourself this time with this new one. Love your sci-fi stories and the humanity/emotions in them

Getting better all the time, I certainly hope you write a book someday if you havent already.

I'm awed.

The authour has built up such a rich background for this story.

Ash's revelation was chilling. But realistic. I could easily see human beings doing this to one another.

I'm hooked but good.

hearing Ash's story almost made me cry

there is no stopping now - I have to find out how this story continues.

suspense with a smile and a lot of heart - how could i resist it?!

I found it hilarious that the bad guys names coincided with Fox show hosts. Keep up the great work!

...A Dead Mans World. Thanks for the spin-off it's great.

EXTRAORDINARY ....... You're creating such intense outstanding fantastic tales and with all the dramatic events, the magical happenings is thrilling to read ...... Chapeau ..... 💖

nice story, rich imagination and an classic fail in the storyline: an spoiled teenager gets what she wants, do whatever she just think without any opression against (high?) security details... Yes, of cause. And because of high-security the next three roomate teenagers can attend, too. Sure. Like some cream on your icecream, missus "i-just-do-whatever-i-want" while you jump from one point (i go to school) to next point (now i go home) and back? Propper security guidelines, yeah. But still, interesting sidestory to the dead mens world, which i really appreciate.