All Comments on 'Dying Embers'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

great tale.

One small error I noticed:

"Do not pity me Madeline. There are other beautiful things in the world other then the visuals."

It is not THEN.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved Robert's sexy body and hairy chest. Maybe they can get together again?

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