All Comments on 'Early Relief'

Good start... But it can be much better. You need to give more time to the sex part to bring any arousal in the reader

Too quick. The journey to the mountain peak is half the fun. Some more fleshing out of the characters so the reader will be pulling for them to connect (or tease each other more). I think readers want more from the characters so they can get into the story and enjoy the interaction and emotions. I have read many stories here on Lit and those are the ones I enjoy and remember. Don't let the naysayers get you down. Thanks for your time and imagination.

It could have lasted longer but it's good. Nice to read a titty suck story that isn't actually about a blow job. More please !