All Comments on 'Easy Access, Fast Fill'

What a wonderful story! And so well written. Amy

Interestingpremise.

But the sex is sooooo automatic. Soooooo mechanical.

Needed to slow down. And then slow down some more.

Needed lots more foreplay/preliminaries/teasing.

Needed for her to have explored what kind of women turned him on. And why.

Needed for her to have asked him about the kind/s of women he'd had sex with before. Age? Body types? Did he like to use his mouth a lot?

Could have used her asking him about his masturbating. Did he do it often? When was the last time? What does he imagine while he's jerking?

So much more.

Ad what is ARTIC? Is it supposed to be ARCTIC?

Three stars.

Well, thanks for the feedback, but it would be far better if you were not 'Anonymous' so we could discuss your comments.

Many of my submissions fit the mould you're talking about. Take a look at my latest, 'A Game of Consequences', for example. This wasn't meant to be one of those stories.

Oh and YES, it was meant to be 'artic', short for 'articulated lorry' (truck with separate trailer in your parlance). But this is a British story, set in the UK, so he wouldn't be using American slang.