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PlunaPlunaover 1 year agoAuthor

Hi all! Just something short and sweet for the Winter Holiday contest and to get me out of a bit of a slump! Had this idea sitting in my to do list for a while, finally realized it would be perfect for Christmas, especially for these two characters! Hope you guys like it! :D

FandeborisFandeborisover 1 year ago

That had love for each other all the way through. Great story.

yoongyoongover 1 year ago

Aaahhh I love your stories so much! They’re always so well written and hot. Loved this one and can’t wait to read more from you about this pair or eve from more than okay!

MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

An erotically fun piece; perfect for the upcoming season. Glad you are trying your hand at writing — it is going well. You obviously are having creative fun.

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsover 1 year ago

Two HOT, and beautiful ladies, sharing their love at Christmas... NICE!!! And those buttery, cookies with the candy cane icing sound delicious!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So good. Nice writing and full of love and affection.

Might look for another of your stories. Wish they were longer.

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai6435 months ago

So so good!

Great story!

Thank you

galadriel_fangaladriel_fan5 months ago

This was fun! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

Very hot, very loving. Really hoping we get to see their relationship develop and their world expand.

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Hello! I've been lurking on this site for a while and thought I would write some stories for writing practice! I'm still new to this, so comments are appreciated :)

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