All Comments on 'Ebony Workers and White Boss'

When a white guy fucks black women. Instead of the other way around. I especially like it when a white guy fucks a married black woman and she has a kid by the white guy instead of the other way that most of the stories go. Way to go.

I'm all for some big-tit threesome but this was staight out of a cheap porno. Be more creative

You started well but the picture you painted seemed to indicate that the first encounter was a dream. Then you launched directly into the sex. Give us a little lead into how they decided to submit and why. Other than being their boss it seems highly unlikely that this could occur. Keeping to reality is a way to bring the reader into your world. Overall the story OK so I give you a 2.5, that rounds to a three. Keep writing!

I sometimes like an uncomplicated story, especially when it's aimed directly at my favorite fantasy situation: super-hot black women eagerly giving themselves to a white guy. Keep going!

...SamuelX?

[shudder]

lame

I can only assume the author is. 13 year old virgin

Heed the constructive criticism and edit the heck out of this. Could be an amazing story if you place serious effort into it. I was only able to make it halfway through the first page. Hope you give it another go. Best wishes.