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by darrenr

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lc69hunterlc69hunter3 months ago

sweet, erotic, and beautiful

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Well paced, very erotic. Will the two couples meet again?

MedicalpeteMedicalpete3 months ago

Really well written! A very touching tale of the fabulous bond growing between all of the characters! Thank you for the wonderful start to my day!

tinydiamondtinydiamond3 months ago

6 out of 5. Wonderful story, very erotic, well written.

ausrabbausrabb3 months ago

thankyou well written

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I gotta say I was reluctant at first, seeing 5 pages but I didn't skip a word. Great story!

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanus2 months ago

A well written story with great character development and includes imaginative developments!

mikepriveemikeprivee2 months ago

I was so hoping that the two couples would have swapped and fucked in the morning, after the skinny dip in the lake!

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