by Miz Meagan
Please do some more. You're a little off the beaten path and your writing is good enough to get away with it.
I loved this but it seemed like you left the end open am I right is there more on this one coming?
Some minor typos throughout,but nothing distracting.
I feel like I'm coming in at the middle of the story. Who are your characters? How did they get to Mars? How did they meet their first local? ETC.
It also lacks an ending. It just stops. In all honesty, I've read book excepts that were more complete.