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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Looks like a good start. Please tell what's next!

stevesthenamestevesthenamealmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you! Part 2 is up, parts 3 and 4 are coming together...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Premise with potential.

But not even a real beginning. Much too short. Not even a scene.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Have just found this site and this is my first read. So far so good. I happened to read part 2 first. So I think I'll i read part 3 when it comes out. I'm also a writer. I found this an easy read. Although a little short. Nice to see good wording with out the crud words. I fully expect an erection before it's finished. Just my thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great start to the story. We’ll set up - good character description and though short, very erotic

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50-something bicurious guy in the south of England. I enjoy writing and reading erotic fiction of many kinds, but especially stories that focus on my kinks. I currently have a story series going - all about the tease - if you'd like to take a look I'd love to hear what you th...

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