Hey, just read all of the parts to the story so far! This is a great story. You really have a sense of how to write good dom-sub stories, and it's clear that you have been a reader for a long time. Please keep going on!
Hey there! My name’s Eva O’Hara and I’m proud to say I’ve been writing Erotica for nothing short of ten years. For more story options, take a peek at my Smashwords account and pick your poison: https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/EvaO%27Hara