by mindventure
I wasn't prepared to enjoy it as much as I did and I think the realistic approach tot he whole endeavour is what makes it so great. The roundabout fashion in which he met up with Holly only strengthens her image, not to mention her transformation from a tomboy to the woman all neighbourhood admires. She'll be the right one for him and I'm looking forward to reading it.
The storyline flows so smoothly that I found myself disapponted when I reached its end....I wanted more. As usual with this writer, there is great character development, romance and fantastic, believable sex scenes. I am anxiously awaiting another story.
Great story. Great character development, Great Sex. Can't wait to see what happens between Dusty and Holly.
Really really excellent writing, I love the style. I have thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
This first installment of this marvelous story has not had a comment for two and a half years. I'm partly to blame because I read it some months ago, but have forgotten a good deal of it, which does not take long with my (lack of) memory.
However, it has received recognition in the excellent 4.75 star rating and also in the favorites. One favorite per thousand views is exceptional, and this story has received nearly half again that.
I love good sex education stories. This one is more than good. Especially ones where the education is later put to good use with a love interest, which appears to be the prospect here. Easily 5 stars.
Thanks so much for the well written story -- both from the literary standpoint and the skilled storytelling and also the interesting plot.
Paul in Oklahoma