All Comments on 'Edward & Ella - The Reunion Pt. 01'

This is a very promising start! Look forward to reading more!

Great to know passion can last that long. One typo on this page: "...he juices covered their things"..........should be: "....her juices..."

Good luck to you. Stay juicy.

Interesting that the writer mentions they both have a family and implies they have to hide what they are doing but no specific mention of a spouse for either of them. Are they both dirt bag cheaters?

@anonymous(1) - Thanks, looking forward to writing more!

@lawoftheheart - Thanks for the feedback and the comment. I noticed another typo as well ... haha oops.

@anonymous(2) - Considering one of the story tags is 'affair' you're correct in assuming they're "both dirt bag cheaters". Just remember, these are stories/works of fiction on an erotica site and are meant to be explicit, not (always) necessarily 'nice' :)