All Comments on 'Eighteen-Year-Old Needs To Be Punished Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

pummel horse? Inadvertent and funny misuse. Pommel I assume!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good enough for a second chapter

Pappasleaze!

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

I agree, follow up including the boyfriend.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Short & yet very sweet! Definitely made it's intended point! So why not a followup chapter that equaIs (or even outdoes) this one? After all. it's been nearly a year for you to ruminate about it!

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...