All Comments on 'Elaine's Indiscretion Pt. 01'

So, a serial cheater, unable to be faithful to a man, even when he gave her a second chance? She fucks around on her way to the wedding? With any luck at all, he'll see her with come dripping on her chin or something and call off the wedding before it's too late. What a miserable gutter slut. No man should have to marry a skank like that. Wearing white? Never less appropriate than on this bitch.

Thanks for the read.

I loved loved this story! Definitely waiting for the continued part haha. This is how I write, very real and I'm wondering if I could write these.

Why on earth is a slut getting married? If they have no intention on staying faithful why write about such a character?

He should have learnt his lesson the first time, most of us wouldn’t even consider marrying someone who’d cheated before. Stupid ass