All Comments on 'Elena in hell'

You and I have the same kink, and I'll read any story that features a head shave.

Your story has a very good set up and some decent pay off. Most of it read pretty well, but there were a few clunky sentences. There is room in the story for motivations of the government, the people who set up Elana, the minister, and why they chose Elana.

I look forward to more works from you. If you continue this story, I recommend you get more into Elana's mind. Especially, her thoughts about what she lost on the outside of her head.

I love headshave stories. The reason that I love them is because it is a long-term humiliating punishment. This is a good story but I wanted to get into Elena’s head so that I could feel her pain. How did she feel when she learned that she was to be shaved? What were her thoughts when it was happening? After the shave did she feel like she was less of a woman? I love the idea of the story but it needs more depth. Keep writing!!