All Comments on 'Elephant in the Closet'

Haha! Great story, succinct, erotic and enjoyable. Love the initial twist and second at the end. A few minor missed words/spells but otherwise great to read! I'm a big fan of plausible, unique story ideas that are hot as hell and the idea of making her feel she has to prove herself like that--while apparently also being gay, I need to hear about THAT side of the story?!--as a ploy to get her to perform is great. Nice work!

I think Simon executed his plan perfectly playing Kaz to get her to provide her body to him. He had been stroking and lusting for Kaz for 6 months until he had the plan worked out. Kudos to Simon. Five stars. Now Simon will try his next scheme to get Kaz and Leslie to join him for a threeway in which he gets to watch them in girl on girl and he fucks both of them..

Would love a 2nd chapter getting both women. Then taking their ass cherries.

Good story. You didn't show it but I'm sure it was all just a risky plan for Simon to trick Kaz into sleeping with him. Some of the evidence he used that he was gay could've easily been explained after all. The ending was a nice twist; the whole time I thought maybe she was also using this as excuse to fuck Simon as well until she made that phone call. But I don't know why this was in the humor/satire section; it was a little funny but I felt it could've been better for the EC section. Other than that, it was a very enjoyable story. 5-stars.

A retread, many years old now, yet still gets posted on a different site. The old errors are still there. Get an editor.

I've read this before, not cool. If you are uploading your old content, you should mention it.