All Comments on 'Elf Maidens of Thurn Pt. 01'

it is a good story please continue it would be interesting if the male asked the sister if she wanted to join him and her sister and all three start a small harem and collect other elf maidens from the ghetto and start a small workshop of assorted skills of the elven maidens so he understands them more for his mission and report to the higher ups

Interesting, inherently sexual fantasy premise, focusing more on world building and social justice than on eroticism. Some really smart moves in characterization and plot development, and I appreciate the point, that the male protagonist is dealing with a layered problem that defies oversimplification. If I had one complaint, it's that any kind of person being content to keep a numbered designation and have no legitimate name stresses my suspension of disbelief. I think it's an intentional choice, indicating the degree of institutionalism these Elves experience, and perhaps a setup for further character arc. Look forward to seeing how it develops.

@Anonymous, that would be a possibility, but seeing as Alex already was warned his predecessors were sacked because they couldn't keep it in their pants, being overt about his personal involvement with even these two is risky. We'll see what she does with it.

When looking for a story to read in the new listings, I tend to skip over any fantasy type ones but for some reason this one caught my eye. I surprised myself by really enjoying it. My only slight gripe is that there was no actual description of what an elven maiden looks like. For a newbie like me it would help my understanding. Looking forward to the next installment.