by Trysten
I really like the story and characters, and I hope you continue with it for awhile. I just wish you would upload more than once a week, but beggars can’t be choosers. I love Elise, but the narrator is such an idiot. He knows how she gets when she’s drunk, and he clearly wants a repeat performance with her; so why leave when he’s seen how much she’s had to drink? Looking forward to Chapter 4!
Your stories are amazingly hot. I love following the adventures of Elise. Great story crafting. I’ve also read most of your other stories while waiting for Elise chapter 3– I loved the slutty adventures of the girl on vacation with her friends. Your fans should definitely check that one out. It’s a 4 part series. Loads of hotness to walk to!
But I start to find it bothering that the sex parts *always* involve a heavily drunk girl. She’s a slut but she only goes slutty when she’s had loads of drinks too many? Meh...
Loving this series and all your writing. Is chapter 4 coming soon?
I’m looking forward to reading more about Elise!