All Comments on 'Elise's Wedding Bells Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Elise's POV! Awesome

Been waiting for this. Elise's point of view takes the storyline into a higher gear. Well done and thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Something I can never figure out

A woman is so sex crazed she feels entitled to get it wherever she can. She says she loves the guy, but is not willing to honor the basic tenets of marriage. If that is the case, why get married?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very Different

Nice shift to Elise's perspective! I hope you continue telling Kevin and Elise's story. You do it so well.

badlulubadluluabout 5 years ago
Fantastic

What a great way to resume Elise's story. The perspective shift is terrific, and the writing is just as hot as before. I can't wait to see how the wedding plans unfold!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Welcome back!!

Creamfilled ginger snap Please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Cream filled indeed!

Oh men. Cant wait for the next in the series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Your Elise stories are my favorite on this whole site. I'm so happy you wrote another one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Excellent story. I wouldn't know how to act in a situation like that. In my younger days, I might have been tempted. I was quite sexually active during those days; even kept a calendar.

pantsalonkspantsalonksabout 5 years ago
Finally

I was so happy and found it funny when Emily called out Elise bullshit and elise trying to find excuse as to fucking those guys wasnt cheating.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nice!

I think changing to Elise’s point of view to hear the real details of previous events was a great change of pace and cements what had actually been happening (as we all have inferred all along). I look forward to future submissions and maybe more details from Elise as well. A bachelorette party and naughty honeymoon should provide everyone plenty of inspiration

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Your big fan here

Any estimate when will you be posting an Elise story?

brazilianguy1brazilianguy1over 4 years ago
Love it

Please,keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
No more???

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
5 months...

Whens the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Series is dead?

If it is, that's sad. Bad way to end it :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please more!

Hey author still going? Please let us know, youre the only reason I check every day!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One story in a year?

I do not want to sound entitled I just want another Elise chapter can you please let us know if there will be another thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing!!!

Awesome story for Elise perspective. Can't wait to read more like this. You are one of my top 3 authors and hope to see you post again soon. It's been way too long

snugglepuss13snugglepuss13about 4 years ago
Cant wait any longer

We hope to see your new work soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Series dead or what?

Where's the next chapter cmon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Aah, shit

I guess she was cheating on him the entire time, I get that she thinks she told him and had permission but in the end, from most peoples views that is full on cheating, just without the romance.

It's still interesting because it's like an oblivious cuckold but without the protagonist being completely stupid, just overly trusting and having bad communication with his girlfriend.

Regardless, his friends are shitheads and deserve bad shit to happen to them. I know it's fantasy, still pisses me off though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A continuation would be the perfect x-mas gift for the comunity!

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