All Comments on 'Elizabeth on the Bathroom Floor'

Strangely emotional. So Elizabeth was hypnotized by some random stranger and her girlfriend is looking after and helping her recover?

Nice... could you make a sequel of sorts where we get to see Elizabeth's point of view of this story?

You’re simply the best short form writer on this site period! Nobody does it better!

Brilliant!

Wow. that was spectacular, thank you x

Aww, this one is sweet!

This was great and definitely deserves a sequel or 2. Maybe a darker installment where Lizzie gets used by strangers

This is one of the most brilliant and unique mind control stories I've ever read. I would to to read a prequel telling how they fell in love, or a sequel where they confront the mind controller and live happily ever after. But I think the story probably hits hardest when it stands on its own. Exceptional work!