All Comments on 'Elle's Adventure Ch. 03'

I wanted to comment, but I just feel tongue-tied. My tongue wants to do other things ...

Oh fuck it, I can't give any insightful comment this time, the story made me incapable of putting any coherent thought together - but that's a good thing, isn't it?

This serial is in danger of becoming addictive! It's 7 o'clock in the morning, and I'm lying in bed with a lovely hot cup of tea, reading it again. My cuckold has just gone off to work, having been made to read the latest installment of Elle and Fabienne's developing love affair to me. He likes hot lesbian stories just as much as I do. It goes without saying that we both award you 5 🌟 for this chapter.

Oh my, that sex scene sent so many messages to to my brain. Young lovers, pool parties, a new sub, being taught. Your way with words astound me. Will be following this adventure like your many others. 5 stars my love.

...and absolute power corrupts absolutely. So our Elle needs to beware of the path she has started down. She is young and unlikely to know where to draw the line. Elle might also care to contemplate the other warning: "Be careful what you wish for..." I'll be keeping a grandfatherly eye on her and won't stint to offer my (probably unwanted) advice when it seems to be necessary. And how will Mother react when she finds out the truth---she seems all right with the idea of young gentlemen callers but will she be as open-minded about young lady callers?

Thank you so much, darling Bobbi, I always look forward to your comments - thank you xxxx

Thank you, darling Olwen. I am so glad that you put him to good use and that you are enjoying this so much xxxxx

Darling Amadeus, giggles, well it is fun, and as you say, sometimes coherent thoughts won’t come xxxxx

Thank you, darling Maonaigh - and as you will see in the next chapter, you have highlighted what will become a central theme xxx

Wow - What a brilliant and erotic adventure. I am addicted to this series and cannot wait for the next chapter. I wonder what happens when / if Mum uncovers the truth behind her daughter's "boyfriend". Brilliantly written, superbly observed and so damned sexy! thank you X

Hello Lady Pixiehoff ..... There is no argument against your talent , im still amazed anytime im coming back for more chapters ...... Just one thing is obviously that i miss the finery i form of sensitivity and emotional bonding, romance ...... Its just about bedding and fucking ..... If this is the main attribute from this story so i have to follow this girls the path for the next 8 weeks with elle and fabienne

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💖💝

Thank you so much, Telugu. The next chapter is nearly ready to submit xxxxx

Sensuous and erotic..very arousing!

A wonderful sexy couple!

They belong together!

Well done!

Miss Pixie - I can not add any more words that have not already been stated about your writings and now this reveal of a story line. So I will try with " brilliant" alternating chapters from both Fabienne's POV and Elle's while telling her story. The scenes of the young, inexperienced but learning to explore her powerful prowess with the cunning ways of an experienced teacher to also get what she wants and lusts for is again.. Brilliant !

.

The voicing and the perpective of "Elle" is challenging enough, but Miss Pixiehoff has taken on the added difficulty of walking us through "Elle's" coming of age as "Fabienne" helps "Elle" recognize and own her dominant powers in their relationship. Some of "Elle's" harsh and insensitive words and actions directed at "Fabienne" seem to be purposefully clumsy as "Elle" struggles to find her legs as the dominant in the erotic power play. I recognize that "Fabienne" has sent signals of positive reinforcement when "Elle" is crude and self accomidating when taking pleasure from "Fabienne", but it will be interesting to see if "Elle" refines her approach, or if she becomes more debasing and inconsiderate of "Fabienmes" feelings as the relationship develops. Once again I am left questioning whether someone like "Fabienne" could really get off on such debasing treatment as she seems to encourage from "Elle". I'm very curious to see how the power play unfolds. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Thank you, Franziska xxxxx

Thank you so much, Paul xxxxx

Thank you so much, darling Erica. Yes there is a challenge here - and I shall endeavour to do it justice xxxxx

Thank you, Anonymous. You set out very well the challenges I have set myself. The next chapter will take the dynamics in what will be, I hope, an interesting direction xxxxx

Hot as hell, loved it.

Thank you so much Sandy, coming from you that is a huge compliment xxxxxx

So sweet to see Elle being vulnerable and Fabienne willing to teach. So sweet to see two women grow both as a mature woman with her own history willing to help a young woman become the woman she was meant to be. So many facets to this, so much beauty in all of it. I think sometimes I see you reach a peak and you go and add 1000 feet. I am so excited to see what chapter 4+ hold.

Thank you so much MamaS xxxxx

Well done Pixiehoff ! I like your writing. You show background to your characters which pulls the reader right into the story. I've been reading stories for years on Literotica and can tell if a writer is fair, good or excellent. I was not disapointed with your style. Your story moves along at a good pace. And for myself, being a French Canadian, I can say your French is excellent. ;-) However, I was a bit taken aback by Fabienne being called a Bitch. Maybe this is the way it goes between lesbians. :-)) It has probably more to do with character play. Now I will move on to the next chapters in your HOT story.

What a lovely development and the younger domme to the older sub is a nice touch.

Thank you so much darling Julie xxx

Hot And Sexy,,, Yes!

-

Hallo Pixie!

-

Oh Yeah, this is developing nicely, but I just wonder what Mums reaction would have been if she had caught her daughter Elle, in Mums own bed with another female eating pussy and playing with sex toys.. Myself, I think that's a pretty good hint that she's a lesbian!

-

Now that my English has gotten a lot better I'm discovering all of those little phrases you slip in, that I might have missed in translating like, [And I slept the sleep of the just - just totally fucked that is.] _ I love it!

-

Thank-you for sharing your stories with all of us, another 5&5, 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms..

-

From your two kinky dyke friends,

The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

💋 💋 💋 🌹 🌹 🌹 💋

Thank you so much my darlings xxxxx

I loved how even with such inexperience, Elle took control. I loved how creative and empowering Elle is becoming. I laughed at how, even with precautions, she’s still not smarter than mom.

Another fantastic entry.

Thank you so much, Elle, I am so glad you are loving this one xxxxxx