All Comments on 'Elle's Adventure Ch. 04'

OMG! What a twist! Pixiehoff, I just adore this saga. What a deliciously filthy mind you have, and how beautifully you write. This is getting to be a habit. Your stories are published and read to me by my cuckold. I love seeing the effect your words have on him (and on me too, of course!). His chastity device is always much tighter by the end of the chapter! More please. I hope my 5 🌟is sufficient incentive to get that filthy mind working on the next installment.

OMG you do it to me every time. Such twists and turns. Love it.

And the none too subtle 'tu ma domine du fond' so many inexperienced younger sub try to without realizing what they are doing. I like to encourage them before alerting them to the perils of trying to top from the bottom.

Your writing and story telling is so encaptivating.. More please. XXX

5 stars once again.

As I think I've mentioned before, the alliterative Elle has a lot to learn when it comes to subtlety. Yes, there's time for her to grow up properly but with the kind of world she's moving into she needs to get to it quickly. And thanks, Pixie, for a bloody good laugh---the last half-dozen lines of this chapter cracked me up. Almost as funny as Morecambe and Wise.

LOL. But on a more serious note, you made me think about liking to please and surrendering control. For me these are very different.

I didn't know that "topping from the bottom" literally translates as "dominer du fond" in French, but clearly that's what Fabienne does to Elle during their Skype session.

Darling Pixie, it seems to me that you are describing an actual session from Emily's Escorts. Thank you for opening the door for us onlookers.

What else is la petite prof soumise up to? Is she coming on to her landlady with her deliberate acts of service? Will she succeed in gradually turning her into a loving lesbian dominant lady? Only time will tell.

It's funny when Elle, the eager student, calls Fabienne "Teach". To me that evokes Edward Teach, the actual name of the English pirate Blackbeard. And like a pirate commandeering a ship, Fabienne surely commandeers Elle as the vessel for everything that floats her boat. Off to the club they go.

BTW I would have totally bought you a drink and not considered it a waste of cash. Like Fabienne in the club, a guy can also get a strange pleasure out of being sidelined and slightly humiliated by two gorgeous women and at the same time feel somewhat appreciated.

And then ... OMG, a lesbian mother/daughter fantasy in the making! I hope it will be scandalous, outrageous and absolutely wonderful.

Ah, Pixie….

And suddenly, there are curves in the road!

You are a fearless writer: It was not enough for you to take on racial and social tensions, power dynamics, class status, international politics, culinary preferences, toxic men, judgmental women, Skype sex, and sexual rights…Now we add familial rivalry and, perhaps, incest!

May St Bede guide you and protect you….

Ok, didn't see that one coming at all. Very good Pixie. I've yet to read a story of yours I didn't like.

5/5

J

You are very naughty

Thank you, darling Kay xx

Thank you, used, I like to keep my readers guessing xxxxx

Thank you Paul - and I hope St Bede understands xxxxx

Thank you Amadeus, darling. I did not like to ask my French friends for a translation - awkward questions are to be avoided. I am so glad you are enjoying it - I am pushing boundaries here - and let's see where it goes next xxxxx

Thank you Anonymous. Yes, there is a critical difference between liking to please and surrendering control - in a sense it is at the heart of the story xxxxx

Darling Maonaigh, I am always glad when the humour is noted. Yes, critical to the next part is how Elle responds to a situation neither she not her mentor had foreseen xxxxx

Thank you, darling Bobbi. Yes, I am trying to capture that part of Elle. She has confidence, but zero experience - and if she is wise, she will allow Fabienne to guide her xxxxx

Darling Olwen, always happy to help! And you will be pleased to know that chapter 5 is underway xxxxx

My Oh My !!! That was quite a twist right at the end of the chapter. I wonder......do they refer to that as a "twisthanger" ending??? Now I'm even more curious to see how things progress for the primciple characters. This could go so many different directions. Hmmmmm.....🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Thank you, Anonymous - I an pleased that you are enjoying the twists and turns - more to come xxxxx

Mmmmh and her mum hasn't discovered her own daughter in the club while dancing? ...... Ok may the eyesight the darkness the age or even drinks are playing in ....... What puzzles me is one thing, fabienne worked so hard for her degree, becoming a teacher and now she moves on the edge for loosinf her job, because "violently with knowledge" breaking a school rules or im wrong? ..... As being happy for fabienne to achieve such high standards for being a refugee, i hope her future will be safe ...... And now mum comes in to the game, lesbian bar, discovered as well as discovering her own daughter as one ...... This may will guide to some interesting talks

Lady Pixiehoff squeeze love into this story, this is im missing 😔

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Ah, Franziska, wait and see - there is much more to come xxxxxx

Dear Pixie,

Happy Groundhog Day!

I sent you your January Literotica slides for your review.

I hope you like them.

I plan to utilize this same slide deck layout format moving forward.

Please respond to this comment, because I already counted this comment as number 21 and your comment response as number 22.

Next month, you will see a Star ⭐ Rating Slide.

Please Enjoy Your Day ☀🌞 😎 Pixie and Stay Healthy & Safe

v/r

Your Literotica Bookkeeper 📗📘📙📚

Thank you Jeff, I much appreciate all your hard work on my behalf xxxxx

Fab story so far, Pixie! Love the bit about the drink "they claimed was coffee"!

Seriously, you handle the emotional stuff so well, the doubt, the back story. And also the swapping POV. Nice stuff.

Thank you, Only)_connect, it really helps to read such comments xxxxx

Another great chapter. I love how the doubts and self-doubt is brought out. We are always a bundle of uncertainty aren't we? It sometimes feels like we are all doing our own games of pin the tail, blindfolded bumbling around our lives with sharp things pointing in all directions and we are all trying to find our individual destinations. This story show so much of our own explorations.

thank you so much, Mama, and yes, it does show how we fumble on xxxx

Oooh, what a tantalising twist at the end! Mum and daughter finding out at the same time that they prefer their own gender, how wonderful.

Elle seems to have settled perfectly into the role of Mistress and fits it beautifully.

This chapter is perfect in so many ways and I loved reading it; I have so many chapters to catch up on, so I’m going to be busy for the next few days - oh what a chore that’s going to be!! 😉

Giggles, I have missed your comments, Wiz, and look forward to more xxxxx

It's confusing when you change the pov every chapter.

Not to most of my readers, but each to their own x

I love a twist and that was an excellent one. Enjoyed the story but the ending... wow.

So glad you enjoyed it Julie xxxxx

omg i'm getting so caught up in this. that final revelation was so sexy, can't wait to read what happens next!

So glad you are enjoying it Chloe xxxxxx

Ohh goodness! What a wonderful evening of dinner, then dancing, then !!!

Beautiful, captivating, exciting and yummy 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

so glad that you enjoyed it darling xxxxx

MUM?... Ohh That's Cute!

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Hallo Pixie!

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Well look at the bright side, our girls won't have to worry about Mum coming home early and catching them wrapped in a lesbian embrace, no I think Elle, Fabienne, Mum and her lesbian lover might all be home, having a hot four-way lick off,,, yes!

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Thank you, 5&5, 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms..

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From your two kinky dikes friends,

The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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Thank you so much my darling Kat - so glad you both enjoyed it - and there is much more to come xxxxx