All Comments on 'Elle's Adventure Ch. 11'

What a treat to wake up to on a wet Monday morning! By the time I'd finished reading this chapter it wasn't only the weather outside that was wet! You're an amazing storyteller Pixiehoff. I hope chapter 12 is being crafted in your disgustingly filthy mind even as I type this! It goes without saying that you get yet another 5 🌟 rating. XXxxXX

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The story keeps me hooked. Each episode has another turn.

I am beginning to notice how not all Dommes are the same, as not all subs are the same, How different the three submissive women are and in turn are different to Elle's mum. I think as Elle comes to terms with who she really is and how that impacts on her life, going forward, does she fall in love with a sub, in which case would she treat her soul mate differently? Would she be attracted to a woman who wasn't a sub or a heavens forbid, what if she was attracted to a woman who was a Domme, the battle of wills would be fantastic and so erotic.

Pixie your writing makes some of us look so amateurish [me] love the story, love your writing. 5 stars.

Elle is the narrator here, right? So why does she write about herself in 3rd person? Quoting: "Tonight? I wanted to go back at Elle's. I wanted Mum."

Yes, yes, we know that Amy is fat. No need to repeat it in every sentence. A savvy Dom uses humiliation in well proportioned doses, at strategic moments. Going on and on about "my older sluts" does not a Dominant make.

You have still so much to learn, Elle. It might surprise you that there are even dominant women who like to suck cock and find it empowering rather than submissive. (I am blessed to have counted a few such women amongst my lovers.) Think about it: a guy with his cock in your mouth is completely at your mercy. Of course, this does not apply to fake cocks, so there is that.

And your drink of choice to go with a chicken casserole is - diet coke??? I suspect you wanted to shock Fabienne who comes from a country where they actually know about pairing food and drinks.

But then you are the one who is shocked by realizing how different Fabienne's cunt looks from Penny's. I can only suspect: Her clit is perhaps seriously underdeveloped, so you suspect it's not there at all. FGM is not a Muslim thing, BTW.

Whatever it is, I am puzzled by your surprise. You haven't seen Fabienne's girly parts for the first time. You munched her cunt earlier, remember? You even mentioned it at the beginning of this episode.

This narration is strange. I suspect making Elle sound incoherent is intentional, to illustrate how high she is on her Domme trip. Perhaps the next chapter will reveal what's going on ...

Thank you so much, Cheryle. xxxxx

Thank you, Olwen, yes, 12 is well underway xxxxx

my dearest Miss Pixie... I am sorry I could not get over Elle using the name so often " fat Amy" so loosely and casually. It hurt about as bad as Ruth treating the young Pixie

I can't quite make up my mind what to do about Elle. From the lofty height of my years, the wise old grandfather in me says she needs a slapped arse and sent to bed early. However, the practical side of me says that she'd enjoy that so I'll have to consider some other form of admonishment for her. Perhaps if her trio of worms turned and ganged up on her so that she was one sub with three mistresses. Right now, though, I'm feeling a touch of apprehension for poor Fabienne. Let it not be what I'm thinking.

Jeff, you are an amazing book-keeper, thank you a million times xxxxx

Daring Bobbi, thank you so much, but do not sell yourself short, I love your stories. Yes, Elle is going to have some interesting choices to make soon xxxxx

Darling Wolfie - you get it. Yes, this is Elle intoxicated with her own power and not quite knowing what to do with it. Her inexperience is showing through. She has not seen many pussies, and it was only comparing Fabienne's with Penny's that she realised there was a difference - which she them proceeds to misdiagnose, leading to disaster at the end. She must now either learn from this, or spin out of control xxxxx

Darling Erica, it is, as Wolfie saw, deliberate. We see, here, Elle out of her depth, intoxicated with her own power, but without any idea how to direct that power - a dangerous combination xxxxx

Darling Maonaigh, Yes, Elle has slipped into dangerous waters. There is still a chance she can get out of them - but she will need to realise that power brings responsibilities with it. xxxxx

Waited to respond as it took some time to digest, and still wondering. Maybe overthinking as is my habit, but am concerned about Fabienne (but that is your intention). Suspect I know where you are going and not simply in one direction. As always, erotic and thought provoking — provocative combination.

The complex character development continues, and I’m loving it!

Hot sex, too!

Eager to see what you reveal in the next chapter…

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At the risk of sounding like a rebuttal to amadeus's comment; the line about "at Elle's" was clearly a typo. I also believe that Pixiehoff was being purposefully obvious in her illustration of Elle as STILL being inept in her role as a "domme" OR an adult. Elle's comments about "Fat and thick Amy" demonstrated that Elle was suffering from petty jealousy and egotism that, ironically, made HER look less attractive and less intelligent. Elle's comments about Fabienne's female anatomy struck me as having been born of a lack of empathy, a lack of knowledge, and a lack of a thought-speech filter; again illustrating her immaturity. The fact that Elle comes from a privileged backround and is blessed with exceptional genetics lends itself to her having a superiority complex which (imho) is interfering with her progress towards becoming a "good domme' and an overall good person. This is apparently the first time in her life that Elle has had difficulty in "mastering" anything, which seems to be causing her confusion and frustration (as illustrated by her inner dialogue). I actually feel this chapter was / is the inflection point of the story, and Elle will now be forced to contend with the reality that "with great power comes great responsibility". The next chapter will undoubtably be extremely consequential for all the principal character. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

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Thank you, Migbird. Yes, this chapter is meant to provoke diverse reactions, and Elle will either learn, or fail to reach her potential xxxxx

Thank you so much, Anonymous! Your reading hits the nail on the head! Elle's inexperience showed, and you are correct, the internal monologue was designed to show that her "superiority complex" is an obstacle to her development. Chapter 12 will indeed take it in a direction which will challenge all our heroines xxxxx

darling anonymous Jeff, thank you so much for your stats, which are really very useful indeed. You are a gem of a bookkeeper xxxxx

Thank you so much Paul, and there is much more to come xxxxx

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Ahhh the arrogance of youth. My father always said one should send the young out to work while they still now everything. Or perhaps it would be more accurate to say, if you only have a hammer everything becomes a nail. Pour Elle, trying so hard but still seeing only nails. It will take some time, but she will understand.

Well written darling, as usual. Sorry it has taken so long to catch up.

Thank you Mama, hope you will enjoy the rest xxxxx

That Muslim Thing!?!

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Hallo Pixie!

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Well Love, we or I... had a little difficulty getting here but here we are.

Thank you for another beautifully written hot and sexy chapter, we wish it could be 10-Stars and 10-Orgasms 😜... but alas Literotica says it's a maximum of only 5! 😢

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Love, I have such hate for some Muslim cultures, particularly those religious customs that call for the butchering of a young female's genitals!

Reading this one line: ["Oh fuck! You're not a Muslim are you, it's not that thing?"] _ My mind jumped straight to "The cutting!"... Wow, talk about a quick jolt back to reality, my panties were soaked from my earlier fantasizing, but between my legs I was as dry as the desert, so at that point I was pretty much through, until Jackie ask me what's going on Kat, it's like you just turned off... once I realized that I was just being silly, I started thinking about voting and writing the comment, but before we did... I decided I'd better read chapters 11 and 12 together and I'm so glad we did,,, yes!

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Thank-you, 5-Stars and 5-More Orgasms 😕.

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From your two kinky dike friends,

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Thank you so much my darlings xxxxxx

This chapter was absolutely incredible! It had so much of what I’d hoped for. Elle is so incredible. My heart broke at the end. I feel bad for Fabienne. Her reluctance, her embarrassment. I hope things improve for her in the next chapter.

Very excellent chapter!

Thank you so much, Elle xxxxx