All Comments on 'Ellie & Lucy Ch. 01'

That was wonderful! I don't even mind at all that it is in no wise an incest story. As a first-time writer, you are great and I hope you continue. I suppose Erotic Couplings is where a mother-daughter exploit belongs and these two could certainly enjoy some future chapters, many ways to play that. I hope you do.

Great story. Wrong place for it unless you intend to bring mom and daughter together.

Ditto with odiouser.

Wrong catagory, all together. That took a point or two off.

This was great. I am hoping there will be a part 2

the story was pretty good, I am not sure where the incest was unless it comes in next chapter when they are at home describing their night to each other. I do love how it was mom and daughter who went out together. Pappasleaze!

I hope there are more installments! Even though you definitely need a proofreader, a gave it five stars.

To everyone commenting: yes, I am aware that there is no incest in this story. I didn't actually submit it as an incest story. I honestly am not sure how it ended up in this category. Does anyone know if it is possible to re-categorize a story after it has been published?

To everyone in the comments: Yes, I know there is no incest in this story. I fully agree that this is not the right category for it, I did not originally submit it as an incest story, I am honestly unsure how it ended up in this category. Does anyone know if it is possible to re-categorize a story after it has been published?

Are you going to continue the story? Mom and daughter compare notes? Switch partners? Demonstrate on each other? All 4 together?

Bit vanilla for my tastes, but elegantly written, the dialog is ace, the characters are slick. Gonna read the second part.