All Comments on 'Ellie & Lucy Ch. 01'

Bit vanilla for my tastes, but elegantly written, the dialog is ace, the characters are slick. Gonna read the second part.

Are you going to continue the story? Mom and daughter compare notes? Switch partners? Demonstrate on each other? All 4 together?

To everyone in the comments: Yes, I know there is no incest in this story. I fully agree that this is not the right category for it, I did not originally submit it as an incest story, I am honestly unsure how it ended up in this category. Does anyone know if it is possible to re-categorize a story after it has been published?

To everyone commenting: yes, I am aware that there is no incest in this story. I didn't actually submit it as an incest story. I honestly am not sure how it ended up in this category. Does anyone know if it is possible to re-categorize a story after it has been published?

I hope there are more installments! Even though you definitely need a proofreader, a gave it five stars.

the story was pretty good, I am not sure where the incest was unless it comes in next chapter when they are at home describing their night to each other. I do love how it was mom and daughter who went out together. Pappasleaze!

This was great. I am hoping there will be a part 2

Wrong catagory, all together. That took a point or two off.

Ditto with odiouser.

Great story. Wrong place for it unless you intend to bring mom and daughter together.

That was wonderful! I don't even mind at all that it is in no wise an incest story. As a first-time writer, you are great and I hope you continue. I suppose Erotic Couplings is where a mother-daughter exploit belongs and these two could certainly enjoy some future chapters, many ways to play that. I hope you do.