All Comments on 'Ellie at the Cow Farm'

First half good but you lost me at cattle prod which would do a lot of damage to sensitive areas. Plus you had all this stuff happening to Ellie but she didn’t react to the sex at all… did she enjoy it? did she hate it? Even naive people feel things.

The story says “sixth form” not “sixth grade”. 6th form UK is equivalent to grade 12 US.

Responding to the first comment, the story doesn't say "6th grade" it says "sixth form" which is the equivalent of US grades 11 & 12 (last two years of high school)

6th form = senior year, we’re just gonna assume theyre all 18+

But omg this was so so so hot just fuck! I would love some more!

When the narration shows such contempt for the "heroine" , right at the outset, letting us know she brings everything on herself just because of low IQ , it is hard to continue reading. Part of what makes risque or forbidden fictional fantasies work is a rooting interest for the victim and the expectation of some redeemable outcome after all the dark eroticism.

One the best stories I've read all year, please for the love of God continue and show us more of naive Ellie.

This is incredible. Naïveté leading to simple acceptance and just going along with everything because boys will be boys. More adventures of Ellie, please!

Please write more of such stories! I love it!!

Brilliantly comedic and horny at the same time, please do mooore.

The premise of this story is hot, however the execution is literally so stupid. Took me right out of the moment over and over. A shame really, your hypnosis stories were quite well executed.

Love the story please write more…. Moooooo

This is so good I can’t keep reading 1 and 2 over and over again