All Comments on 'Ellie Exposed'

Love where this is going

Very good and enjoyable read

Nice twist on on the naked girl in the park story. Just the right mix of first person rubbing, and description of the setting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I want more!!!

Thank you everyone for the encouraging comments! It's the first time I've published a story (I scrapped a few other ones). Waiting for the story to go live was nerve-racking. I'm glad people seem to be enjoying it though!

Some background: The scene I really wanted to write was the one with the ice cream, where Kaitlyn reveals that she knew what Ellie was up to all along, then tries to bribe herself back into Ellie's good graces using ice cream. The first half of the story was just to set up the ice cream scene!

Can't wait to read the next installment.

This is great, would love to read more!

It did leave me guessing what was about to happen but I was wrong

Now we’re all eager to find out how Kaitlyn will push her and how it will affect their relationship. So many possibilities starting from there.

Liceaaa, very nice, keep posting the continuous of this story.. I love it !

More!

Please keep going.

This story requires a sequel

I do hope there is more of this story to come. I loved it, 5 stars.

corn been chief of pigo

Really enjoyed this. Wish there was more, Ellie was very brave; Kaitlyn, well, I don't know, but I think she realized that Ellie would get even more sexually excited if she didn't rescue her. And in fact stole her clothes. My pussy meter got wet so I know I enjoyed the story.