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All Comments on 'Ellie Stardust and the Hot TA'

by JosieEdwards

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Cute, sweet story.

I really liked it. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You missed it, Josie....

Nice story, well written.

But "I want this. I want you." should have been followed immediately by "Fuck me, WALTER!"

JosieEdwardsJosieEdwardsalmost 4 years agoAuthor
So true.

"Fuck me, Walter." Oh my god, so true! Thanks so much for your comment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You should have made Molly's surname Jones

Any fan of Ob-La-Di, Ob-La-Da would love you.

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I wrote an erotic short story and realized it is really fun! Currently working on something longer (and even more fun). Check me out on Twitter: @author_josie