All Comments on 'Ellie Submits Pt. 02'

Nice work. An exciting little tale so far. The denial was pretty hot. Can't wait to see where this goes next.

This was a fun story. Thanks.

Well, a very well written story on how women can pleasure each other. I like especially that Ellie is tied down and Miraim punishes and then extracts total pleasure from Ellie. Oh, but Miriam did not tell Ellie that she could cum and Ellie did, like four times. Ellie should be punished for cumming without being told. Tsk, Tsk. I like that Miriam is also teaching Ellie about herself a little at a time. I wonder if Ellie is kind of practicing at home or work....walking that is.

Very nice indeed. I love your descriptions of each character.

very nicely done

Only one drawback, Ellie wasn't given permission to come. Excellent writing again.