All Comments on 'Ellora's Heart Ch. 01'

Needs a good edit.

Not given a rating.

Good story buried under mistakes.

Would like to see more

Oh my gosh, this is perfect. This is so good, thank you so much!!!

I think that this is an entertaining introduction to what will become a longer series. You introduced sex into the equation fairly early into the story so I wonder what type of series you intend to put forth (stand-alone chapters with different experiences or a broader story told through each chapter). Also, will you provide readers with more in-depth knowledge about each character or will each chapter be somewhat superficial with the focus being placed on present occurrences or interactions? I look forward to seeing where you take this story! Ps. I like your attention to detail and writing style.

Your skill is evident.

I hope we get to see more of this tale.

Some very hot concepts in this story. I imagine the submissive girl Ellora was taken from her mother at a young age to be trained to please the mighty Queen.