by Tundra54123
... and, for a first submission, quite outstanding! We have a great new talent here on Literotica - thank you for sharing it with us.
Five stars, welcome and much more of the same, please!
I found the part about the onlookers a bit much. Even if you lived near such a place, not everyone in town would get turned on by the idea. But a good start!
Loved it! It's true there were some typos, but I would love to hear more about other toys and machines tested by Holly. I'm definitely adding you to my favorite authors!
I enjoyed this a lot. I think what makes it exceptional is that in the story's universe, sexuality is a legitimate field of expertise. Holly has the best endurance, and this skill seems to earn neutral respect, not the leering sort that trivializes sexuality or Holly's decision-making.
It doesn't even matter that she is bound and very much not in control, in the camper.
(also, it's really hot.)
I´m a fairly new reader of this page, and have not read anything like this story before, I love it :)
The part with the Academy and the way they teach are inspiring, hope to see more from Elmswood Academy in the near future.
How was Holly recuited to the Academy ?
How has she been trained so far ?
What about the other students ?
What future does she have at the Academy and after she graduates ?