All Comments on 'Elven Job Offer Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wasn't a very big fan of this one compared to some of your other works. Dialogue felt a bit rushed? and it felt like it was harder to get into with the way the description tended to jump around. 3*

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Lover of cute and fluffy stories. Reluctant writer of dark ones. (Cute is so hard to write!) Unashamed Benthamite. Pro-lamia advocate, because they deserve cuddles, not steppies.