All Comments on 'Emerald's Morning'

by IntenseQuiet

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice twist

I love the final twist in your story. Look forward to more of your work.

only_more_soonly_more_soabout 14 years ago
Quick fun

This story was fun, and had personality. Thanks for sharing. It isn't very long, but doesn't need to be either.

StarlessNightStarlessNightabout 14 years ago
Great

Short, sweet. I really liked it.

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 14 years ago
Clever

Sexy and well-written. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great!

Loved it! It would have been great if it had continued with her masturbating In front of him.

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What can I say? I love writing, and thinking of odd ways for people to interact without the usual constraints of societal convention. Just a bit of harmless (mostly!) fun. Also, many of my stories are not overly long and drawn out. They are more of a brief, passionate kiss...