All Comments on 'Emily Ch. 05'

The premise was fun, but the overall impact was diminished somewhat by the "cor lummy" dialogue from the spectators, who appeared to be immitating Dick Van Dyck in Mary Poppins.

Ch4 P1 "if he touches me, he's cheating on you"... so what do you call what she's doing behind his back?? Mere flirting?

Wow, talk about souble standards!

Feel bad for Maurice. He was a good sport about Emily then his wife has unprotected sex with two strangers.

Fantastic read. All 5 chapters were great each one adding to the thrill of the previous chapters. I will be reading all of your stories now. Bravo.