All Comments on 'Emily Steele Science Professor'

This story sounds like it's going to be super hot, I like the setup. But, I'm not 1/4 of the way down the first page and it's used all three tenses multiple times. I get the impression that English isn't your first language... It is super distracting to read grammar as bad as your's. I promise that if you get an editor your story scores will go up half a point. I'll save you the trouble of searching for it: https://www.literotica.com/editors/

I'm going to read this story anyway, I really like your ideas and I want you to write more stories. I just want you to use an editor or learn to stick to one tense (past tense, please) without help. Also, every time you want to use a 'fancy' word, look it up. It's moot, not mute - just to name one of your many misused words.