All Comments on 'Emily's Adventure'

Hot and sensual.

Great imagery of a quick encounter. Looking forward to part 2, hopefully they will engage in a more prolonged session where Emily learns how to pleasure her new friend.

Pretty good for a first submission, though it's a little short: the -act- is described well enough, but I feel Emily's emotions could be more detailed. I'm still a bit iffy about the other woman playing dumb, but there's nothing outright -coercive- so I could still enjoy it in good conscience.

loved it sweetie, for the next add more detail, draw it out longer, feed the passion, a great first story, really.

Short and sexy

Nice quickie

Fun story. Good sex. But I loved the initial lack of common language and the twist at the end. Well done.