- BDSM
- Emily's Initiation
- Page 2
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Lorraine led her plaything to the center of the circle and turned her so that she faced the throne just a few feet away. The girl's heart pounded rapidly in her chest the mixture anticipation and raw sexual arousal fueling her emotions. Her moist womanhood literally throbbed with desire as she had been to the precipice multiple times in the last hour only to have her release denied by the woman who had taken complete control of her every bodily function.
The final exercise of this first session was training for the apprentice submissive on how to properly kneel before her Mistress. Emily proved to be a quick study and was able to master the proper technique rather quickly. Toes pointed, tops of the feet and front of the lower leg upon the floor. Buttocks resting in the curve of the heels, knees apart a little more than shoulder width, back straight, chest out, head up, eyes turned to the floor, hands resting upon the thighs.
Emily was given pause by one final instruction and explanation given her by Lorraine however. "The position of the hands is of utmost importance. When I instruct you to kneel I will always add the instruction palms up or palms down. The palms are an indicator to anyone else who is present. Palms down means the slave may not be touched, she is for only her Mistress. Palms up means the Mistress is sharing her girl and anyone who chooses to do so may use her." she explained.
Those words rattled around in Emily's head for several minutes as she wondered if her Mistress intended to share her with anyone else.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoBut, to me, there was opportunities that were missed. No real playing with Emily's breasts. No licking them. No sucking them. No extended discussion about how Emily felt. Did she like this or that better? What would she most enjoy being done to her next? Did she like her Mistress's body? What did she like? Would she like to make her Mistress cum? How? Had she ever eaten pussy before? Had she ever had her pussy eaten before? By a man? By a woman? Which did she like better?
And so on.
Also, you need an editor. You have a "girls" where it should have been "girl's". And since Emily's a girl, the greeting should have been "Mon amie" because you needed the female form of "ami".
Gave it four stars.
Would like to read more.
Anonymousover 3 years agoIntense and very erotic and that’s from someone who’s only bi-curious. I absolutely loved that you included the safety procedures to me it adds to the eroticism but then we all have our own quirks.
The only negative that sprang to me was likening “50 Shades” to genuine BDSM. I suppose the bare outlines are there regarding dominant and submissive but Christian Grey is hardly a good example of a Dom. Still that’s something that’s easily pushed aside for me I mean.
Hope you carry on to write me, thank you for sharing your ideas.
Tess (uk)
