All Comments on 'Emily's Story Pt. 01'

Regarding the prologue - this was submitted alongside part one but has not yet been approved by admin so still waiting on it. Should hopefully be up soon.

What I want is the next chapter. Very good read thank you for taking the time to write

Emily is a believable character and she is quite charming in her naïveté and curiosity. Her fantasy about her English teacher fed into this story very naturally. Keep it up.

Thanks Listless 1. This was exactly my intention with Emily - to make her character and story credible. Though she is naturally reserved and naïve she ends up doing something fairly outrageous.

For those who were asking about the prologue - this is available now. Also, part 2 is well on its way and I hope it won't be too long before I have that submitted too.

Really enjoyed your Emily stories. Well worth 5 stars.